Thursday, 6 March 2014

5 Sentence Challenge

We had a 5 sentence challenge in writing.  We had to write 5 sentences about this picture.
 
I can see a nice, bright yellow banana and there is also a friendly caterpillar with a ladybug on a lead. There is even a little pear house.  These is also a secret place underground and there is also a little boat.  There is even little onion houses with lights on.  I also saw a gnome.
By Kennedy

Far, far, far away in the little garden is a nice, juicy pear house that a caterpillar lives in.  The caterpillar decided to take a walk down the garden with his pet ladybug.  Close to the pear house there is a banana house.  There are underground houses too.  One of the underground houses has a little black boat.
By Tate

There is a pear that has a window with a leaf shaped door.  The banana has two windows and they are shaped like a circle.  Under the ground there is a village that looks like a river and it has a paddling boat.  A caterpillar is walking a spotty red ladybird.  I can see some light coming out of the beetroot. By Caprice

1 comment:

  1. Hi Kennedy, we like the part where you said, "..a friendly caterpillar with a ladybug on a lead." Tate, we liked the first sentence of you one because it painted a picture for us. Hi Candice, we liked the part where you said about the pear with the leaf shaped door. From Room 10 Scallywags.

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